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Tuesday 8 June 2021

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Today I am going to tell you about my Reading. In my reading I'm reading about the baby hoatzin bird. So it got woken up by something and he peered out from his nest high up in the tree that overhung the swamp below. Then he saw eyes so he jumped in the water. I will show you some of my work. The hurd part was answering the questions. But then I got there by the clues.Bye


From Lilly





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3 comments:

  1. Angela Taylor12 June 2021 at 21:26

    Kia ora Lilly,
    Thank you for sharing your reading work with us. I have not heard of the Hoatzin bird before. What is the coolest information you have learnt about it? Next time I would like you to include why you are proud of your work and to explain more about why it was a challenge. Maybe you could give us an example.
    I look forward to seeing more of your fabulous work.
    Mrs Taylor :)

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  2. Anonymous21 June 2021 at 19:32

    Hi Mrs Taylor. The coolest information about the Hoatzin bird is that it lives in South America and they can have over five eggs. I am proud of my work because I learnt a lot about the Hoatzin bird.
    From Lilly 💙

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  3. Anonymous29 June 2021 at 19:56

    Hi Lilly
    You are the nicest girl ever.

    I liked the when you said the horrid part! This reminds me of when I did this writing. Look back and try to describe the setting where you are.
    You did a very good job!

    From Latoia.


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